Friday 17 March 2017

Literacy Reflection T1W7

This is some of my writing from this week: 

My favourite part at camp was the seal colony.  There were so many baby seal pups at Tauranga Bay. A kea went down where the seals were. It looked very scary for the kea. I thought it was going to be eaten because seals will bite things that move.

We had to write a paragraph about our favourite part of camp and include lots of information using the 5W's and an H.

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