This week in writing we have been looking at writing descriptive paragraphs about the nikau palm. Here is my favourite describing sentence: The Nikau palm is a great tall tree that stands out of the other trees because the branches poke out of the top of the trunk.
Kia ora Levi. I enjoyed reading your post about your descriptive writing on a nikau plam. We sure have a lot of these palms on the West Coast. I especially liked the sentence about the branches poking out from the top of the tree. I wonder if next time you could continue with this writing and add detail about all of the tree from the trunk up. Kind regards Mrs England
Kia Ora Levi, its Kaleb here from Totara 2. This is some great descriptive writing, you should be proud of what you have done.
It is very interesting how the branches stick up from the top, they really stand out. Have you been along the coast road there are heaps of Nikua Palm tree's along there. Maybe next time you could write a weee bit more.
Kia Ora Levi its Levi C here I like how your telling me all about the Nikau Palm tree I think its really great I wish I could see the Nikau Palm tree Keep up the good work.
Kia Ora Levi its kaine here from t2. I liked reading your post about your descriptive writing on a nikau plam. I wonder if next time you can make it a little bit bigger. and you could also make it a bit more descriptive bye.
KIa ora Levi. You have described the Nikau Palm tree well. I think the Nikau Palm grows only on our West Coast -perhaps you could check that out. The new hospital has been named Te Nikau after this beautiful palm.
Kia ora Levi. I enjoyed reading your post about your descriptive writing on a nikau plam. We sure have a lot of these palms on the West Coast. I especially liked the sentence about the branches poking out from the top of the tree. I wonder if next time you could continue with this writing and add detail about all of the tree from the trunk up.
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Mrs England
Kia Ora Levi, its Kaleb here from Totara 2. This is some great descriptive writing, you should be proud of what you have done.
ReplyDeleteIt is very interesting how the branches stick up from the top, they really stand out. Have you been along the coast road there are heaps of Nikua Palm tree's along there. Maybe next time you could write a weee bit more.
Kai Pai.
From Kaleb.
Kia Ora Levi its Levi C here I like how your telling me all about the Nikau Palm tree I think its really great I wish I could see the Nikau Palm tree Keep up the good work.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Levi its kaine here from t2. I liked reading your post about your descriptive writing on a nikau plam. I wonder if next time you can make it a little bit bigger.
and you could also make it a bit more descriptive bye.
KIa ora Kieran
ReplyDeleteKIa ora Levi. You have described the Nikau Palm tree well. I think the Nikau Palm grows only on our West Coast -perhaps you could check that out. The new hospital has been named Te Nikau after this beautiful palm.
hi Levi i like your Blog
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