Friday 7 August 2020

Explanation

This week we did explanations. I did mine on steam trains here is my writing 


first The engineer shovels the coal into the fire box the fire box heats up the boiler which is a big water tank.


 the steam  from the boiler goes through a pipe down to the pistons.


The pistons push the crankshaft and the crankshaft moves the wheel the chimney let the smoke from the fire box out.



Thanks for reading

3 comments:

  1. hello, I really like your water tank! and the colours are really cool.

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  2. Hi my name is Madison and i am in mamuka 2 from grey main school. I like how you have added lots of colours on your water tank because everyone can see the train when you go past. Maybe next time you could add some people waving. bye

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  3. Hello Levi, It's Angelina from Totara 3, I really like this piece of writing because you have a brief explanation on who steam trains work, I also like how you have added a picture, showing us some of the parts. The only thing I can think of that you could add is some more grammar, other then that amazing post.
    - Goodbye for now

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.